Welcome to my blog, I'm a student at Paparoa Range School in Dobson, near Greymouth, New Zealand.
Dear Scarlett,I loved reading about your pet lamb. I really, really enjoyed reading the pieces of description e.g. short wagging tail. I think that by using two adjectives together it gives a stronger mind picture. Nice one!!
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Dear Scarlett,
ReplyDeleteI loved reading about your pet lamb. I really, really enjoyed reading the pieces of description e.g. short wagging tail. I think that by using two adjectives together it gives a stronger mind picture. Nice one!!